Peer Review 4

(comment on: https://mebsliterature.art.blog/2019/08/19/blog-5-creative/) Hi Mariama, I liked your feature of “Author’s Note” because it tells your reader how you connect to the text, you are exploring in the next few paragraphs and the remainder of the blog. I particularly enjoyed reading the link you made between That Deadman Dance’s characters and people from your personal…

Peer Review 3

(comment on: https://brunosliteratureblog.wordpress.com/2019/09/02/art-gallery-of-new-south-wales/) Hi Bruno, I appreciate you starting your blog with the purpose of the art gallery excursion. I am also pleased that Eugene von Guérard’s “Milford Sound, New Zealand” struck your emotions with its elements and deeper meaning. This is one of my favourite landscapes, and you identified why viewers would like the…

Peer Review 2

(comment on:  https://bellablogs98.wordpress.com/2019/08/26/week-4-living-deliberately-as-per-thoreau/ ) Hi Izabela, Your writing is clear and well structured. You take your readers on a journey where they learn your outlook on “deliberately” and then relate to you as you justify your opinion.I agree that there is a correlation between living to survive and living deliberately; as an adult, it is…

Peer Review 1

(comment on: https://cameroncole.home.blog/2019/08/18/australian-literature-1/ ) This was an excellent topic to talk about, and I think you did an outstanding job describing the essence of Australia and its people. I agree that Australia is like a paradox, and I believe it has been this way since the first settlers because that changed the definition of who…